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Emotionally Numb


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#1 HeArT _BrEaKeR

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Posted 27 December 2010 - 05:01 PM

Im emotionally numb
i no longer feel
my life is pointless
it isnt real

no matter how much i try
i never believed
that my emotionless heart
will ever be freed

my emotionless heart
has spun around
untill today
it knocked me down

it left me alone
with a thousand pieces
to put myself together
with no meaning no thesus


#2 navynate

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Posted 05 April 2011 - 09:21 AM

I liked the last line in the sense of the poetic feel. Its a touching piece, truly touching. Matters of the heart usually are, love to hear more especially those of other matters.





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