Okay, even though my last poem only got 2 responses as to how it was...please tell me what you think of this one...
I laugh and talk
Just like you
I eat and drink
Like many others too.
I'm skin and bones like anyone else living
I know how to keep a straight face
Even though my body is shivering.
Why can't anyone see I'm alive
It's totally uncomfortable
It eats me inside.
Sometimes I feel life isn't worth
Everything it comes with
It gives you pain and hurt.
I still go on though, day by day
Knowing that I can make it
To not leave, just stay.
But even though this I still go through
I want to help others
Make sure it doesn't happen to them too...
Okay, it was a little dumb, but whatever. I tried. And if you ask, yeah. This is a poem sorta about me.
-Samantha-
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