My Newer Poem

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My Newer Poem

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Okay, even though my last poem only got 2 responses as to how it was...please tell me what you think of this one...



I laugh and talk

Just like you

I eat and drink

Like many others too.

I'm skin and bones like anyone else living

I know how to keep a straight face

Even though my body is shivering.

Why can't anyone see I'm alive

It's totally uncomfortable

It eats me inside.

Sometimes I feel life isn't worth

Everything it comes with

It gives you pain and hurt.

I still go on though, day by day

Knowing that I can make it

To not leave, just stay.

But even though this I still go through

I want to help others

Make sure it doesn't happen to them too...



Okay, it was a little dumb, but whatever. I tried. And if you ask, yeah. This is a poem sorta about me.



-Samantha- :rolleyes:
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My beautiful baby girl

Autumn E. R-K.

Born on: February 26th, 2007

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