Another Poem

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Beautiful
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Re: Another Poem

Post by Beautiful »

hmm, what about reputation?
Little Miss F*cker,

Don't Move An Inch

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I looked at myself

So many things I hate in me

So many things are so hard to believe

I can hear the whole world calling me

Used to be all that i wanted

You to see all that i you to be

does anyone care




Add me.

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*Jamie*



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Re: Another Poem

Post by Michie »

Really good hun.



But i think the first line should have been :

"All you care about is your reputation"



As for title...the first thing that's coming to my head is "You broke me" .

Ya that really sounds like a cr@ppy title
My tears will be hidden behind this fake grin

You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in

It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame

And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.

-Steph



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