well this one suck but bleh...
I sit on the floor
And stare at the knife
It saved me from all you
But made me end my life
My eyes are closing
As I slip down
I try to scream
But don?t make a sound
It was a mistake
I want to take it back
I now want to live
But its air that I lack
If only I had been
consumed by the fear
I wouldn?t have gone thru
And I?d still be here
But instead I see scenes
Flashing before me
Of the life that I once had
Things that never again can be
I can never again
Laugh, work, or play
My life will be all over
By the end of this day
These are my last thoughts
My feelings and my fears
Finally I?ve accomplished
What I?ve wanted all these years
Finally Accomplished
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Finally Accomplished
I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you
I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you
I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you
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xolilsk8rchicaxo
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hmmm no responses...? :'(
I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you
I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you
I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you
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fightforjay99
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Re: Finally Accomplished
omg steff i love it i love the ending totally i get it all to much wow u left me speechless
Bite ME im a tormented individual
whats one more fall when ur me whats one more skinned knee to bleed
Open your eyes and find urself. Before u decide where u belong decide if that is the only place u want to hide. A place to hide and to dry all the tears awaywhats one more place flee
whats one more fall when ur me whats one more skinned knee to bleed
Open your eyes and find urself. Before u decide where u belong decide if that is the only place u want to hide. A place to hide and to dry all the tears awaywhats one more place flee
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that's real sad! omg..i have nothing to say...imma cry , yo
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It's good! I like that poem, I can relate to it.
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xxlilcubancutie0
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hey forreal its real good! i keep reading it over and over again, yo. and i dont do that too many poems..its real good!
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