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could be triggering



MAYDAY



I walked through the clouds today

trying to find my way

I am so lost

I am so confused

Someone tell me what to do

Mayday, Mayday,

someone hear my call

Mayday,Mayday,

I'm running on empty

with nothing left at all

I see what you dont see

the invisible reaches for me

it grabs me and pulls me

I long to be set free

Mayday, Mayday,

someone hear my call

Mayday,Mayday,

catch me when I fall...

Mayday! MAYDAY!

do you hear my call??





I fell through those clouds today

I stumbled then I soared

Mayday...Mayday??

because no one heard my call

I am now safe in the arms of the Lord
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



I didn't become who I am overnight, you know. I know what it feels like to have your toes crushed in.-Drew



Where in the nursery rhyme does it say humpty dumpty is an egg?
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let me know what yall think.
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



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i like it i really do i think its triggering tho kinda but yea it rocks gurl keep it up and mayday liz plz dont go overboard if u do ill catch you
Bite ME im a tormented individual



whats one more fall when ur me whats one more skinned knee to bleed

Open your eyes and find urself. Before u decide where u belong decide if that is the only place u want to hide. A place to hide and to dry all the tears away
whats one more place flee
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it sucks, i know....any suggestions to make it better?
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



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it use to be "I am now safe in the arms of the Lord" is that better??
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



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ty.... i took away the reaper thing and put the Lord back
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



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thanks. im okay. any more suggestions?
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



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my friend read it and said stop writing like that it scares me ;) i didnt know how to take it, i didnt mean to scare anyone with it.
RIP Ben, Jayce, Justin, Master Chief, Nana, pop Pop, Gavin, Ryan, Amber, Lauren, Kenneth, Denny, Cheri, Erica, Jack,Fransisco,Aunt Mary Larry, Mr. Helliar and Brooke..You are missed.



I didn't become who I am overnight, you know. I know what it feels like to have your toes crushed in.-Drew



Where in the nursery rhyme does it say humpty dumpty is an egg?
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