Dont give up
Dont give up!
You still have a mile to go...
another minute on the show...
another cookie in the jar to go!
Go farther than you ever thought you could go!
I pulling for you! You know???
If you collapse on the ground... Dont worry I pick you up....
If your attitude erupts... Dont worry I will cool you off!!!
Dont give up!
You still have another mile to go...
Okay I know that poem may sound cheap but I thought some of the describing words were good I guess... I wanted a cheery poem posted to... I really hope you ppl dont give up on life you still have alot 2 live 4!
Dont Give Up
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Sky
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Dont Give Up
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese
It was tine to go
Through the fields lay golden
Something wispered- "SNOW"
Leaves were green and stirring
Berries,luster-glossed
But beneath the warm feathers
Something cautioned- "FROST"
All the sagging orchards
Steamed With amber spice
But each wild breast stiffened
At rembered ice
Something told the wild geese
It was time to fly-
Summer sun was on their wings
Winter in their cry
It was tine to go
Through the fields lay golden
Something wispered- "SNOW"
Leaves were green and stirring
Berries,luster-glossed
But beneath the warm feathers
Something cautioned- "FROST"
All the sagging orchards
Steamed With amber spice
But each wild breast stiffened
At rembered ice
Something told the wild geese
It was time to fly-
Summer sun was on their wings
Winter in their cry
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Re: Dont Give Up
ae it's sweet lol! I wish I could write a peom.... or anything for that matter....! But haha its encouraging... nice job
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Re: Dont Give Up
Very nice and encouraging!!!
If you read it in the right context it is actually very deep and touching :-)
-Keep up the good work!-
-FiZz
If you read it in the right context it is actually very deep and touching :-)
-Keep up the good work!-
-FiZz
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thank u all for the comments....
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese
It was tine to go
Through the fields lay golden
Something wispered- "SNOW"
Leaves were green and stirring
Berries,luster-glossed
But beneath the warm feathers
Something cautioned- "FROST"
All the sagging orchards
Steamed With amber spice
But each wild breast stiffened
At rembered ice
Something told the wild geese
It was time to fly-
Summer sun was on their wings
Winter in their cry
It was tine to go
Through the fields lay golden
Something wispered- "SNOW"
Leaves were green and stirring
Berries,luster-glossed
But beneath the warm feathers
Something cautioned- "FROST"
All the sagging orchards
Steamed With amber spice
But each wild breast stiffened
At rembered ice
Something told the wild geese
It was time to fly-
Summer sun was on their wings
Winter in their cry