Cowards Way Out

[SilentEquestrian]

i use to have a different username, but i hadn't been on this wesite in so long i think they deleted it. anyway, i just wanted a place to post my stuff. none of it's very good, but go ahead and tell me what you think if you want too.....



Cowards Way Out



it was that glorious night

when i was feeling down

i cranked up my music

and took out my bong

lite up the weed

and started hitting along

the high became strong

my head started spinning

and the words in the music

became really funny

though through all that

my depression broke through

these feelings i had

i could not control

and in that moment

that second of time

the feelings i had

got to my mind

i hated everyone

and everything

no matter who they were

they were horrible and bad

i went through my house

killing my pets

my siblings

and my parents too

one by one

they dropped to the floor

and the pain on they're face

urged an uncontrolable laugh

outside i ran

screaming wild things

when the person walking by

started to run

they all must die

go to hell

so once agian

i started to kill

everyone was screaming

and running away

the cops were all comeing

few by few

they couldn't stop me

no matter what they did

then it hit me

what i had done

i killed everyone

and everything

i had ever loved

innocent lives

with familys at home

what was i thinking

what had i done

i turned around

and faced the police

while the tears poured down

i started to scream

"i'm so sorry

for what i have done

and i have no right

to live in this town

so now i must go

and leave this world

once agian i am sorry

for all the pain i have caused"

i drew my last breath

felt my last pain

then i turned on myself

and took the cowards way out.







in some spots you have to read it just the right way for it to flow good.....it's just crap anyway. make coments if you want. i'd like to hear what you have to say

[KermitKnowsIloveHim]

I actualy dont thing its crap at all... its quite strong, makes a point. Sad, but we all hate everything sometimes so its kinda like an emotion we all feel just at an extreme. Nice write :-P

[SilentEquestrian]

thanks