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lostsoul40
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I Really Like This One!

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*You dont know*

:wub:

You dont know you are my love,

You dont know you were sent from above.

How i love you, you will never know,

For i am to scared to show.

My true emotions i must hide,

because you make me crazy in my mind.

I love you so much, and love i know is strong,

but i know this can not be wrong!

I wish you could just see,

the love between you and me.

i know it is there,

i feel it when i play with your hair.

I have dropped hints to show,

But you act like you dont know.

So for once i would like to see,

if you are intrested in me!

I cant live like this anymore,

i need you here before,

I go crazy inside,

i can not hide,

Behind these tears i wait,

i wait for you, my love, my crush, my soul mate.
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Re: I Really Like This One!

Post by Mau-Mau »

Bravo! u rymed and u didnt make it sound cheesy! i really like this,, It's so true love is cruel it plays with you heart
Maur
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