Tonight is my birthday
But I don't expect them to remeber that
Its like like any other night
Sitting at the table
I am forced to watch their madness
Forced to sit in silence
They couldn't handle what I have to say
To much hatred in my words
So I find a needle
Find my thread
Sew my mouth up
So my hurtful words wont be said
I'll sit in silence
And glance around the table
No birthday cake
They'll tell me to stop pouting
To stop crying
Its just my birthday
Nothing to care about
I'll run to my room
I'll lock the door
Won't let them in
They'll just be a bore
They'll ruin the party
I'll turn my music up
I'll turn up too loud
They'll knock on my door
But I'll pretend I'm not home
I'll grib my knife
As I smoke some weed
Drink my beer as I take some pills
I'll throw myself a party
I'll have the best night ever
As I stab myself in the stomach
Faster and faster to the music
Then I fall
Fall to the floor
Onto my knees
Fadding from black to white
I'll draw a pretty little birthday cake
I'll draw it in my blood
I'll draw it on my floor
Then I'll draw some candles
Only 15
Then I blow them candles out with my last breath..
All 15.
Birthday
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Birthday
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Everybody will be let down
Make things harder
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Everybody will be let down
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Whoa. That was very creative.
Really great job.
Really great job.
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Yea, I have no idea where that poem came from...
Just started writing it....
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Everybody will be let down
Make things harder
Tiny Voices
Make things harder
Everybody will be let down
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ummm, there sure seemd to be a lot of passion behind it and that made it really effective. It flowed really well, and worked up to its climax very effectively. nice.
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That was an excellent poem. That's honestly one of the best poems I've read in a long time. I hope it's not true You must be very talented.
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