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His voice speaks to me

his eyes look through me

he puts me at a vertex

never going to look behind me

I was once at a verge of suicide

but he was there, willing to hold me and not let go

never did me wrong...

the gates of eturnity are calling for me

but he wont let me go

walking through this elder,

the shrubs are pure beauty

I hear an elegy,

just wen its time for me to go.

when i was surrounded my beauty,

sadness came through.

just when i was full of happieness

sadness hollows me out.

it came after me like a leech,

so here i am, just leave so silently.



is there love for me?

does he need me

he trys to say goodbye

but he cant.

the tears in his eyes are my life.

the blood in my wrist is slowly healing.

i see him at the end of the shrubs as

i am being called, he wont let me go...
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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thank you so much
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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theres a shizzload of badass-ness in that poem. good job joy!
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thanks
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?
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very good..excellent *gives two thumbs up* lol :)
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yay
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?
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