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What You Gave Me

Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2002 1:43 pm
by Misfit_toy
What You Gave Me



broken heart

abundant tears

shattered dreams

wasted years



depleted faith

piercing pain

dying hope

nagging shame



painful scars

seething ire

demolished worth

inner fire



broken wings

harder walls

dying soul

brutal falls



shattered strength

growing doubt

bitter thoughts

mental drought



broken trust

inner craze

wounded psyche

unending rage



frozen heart

abusive life

forgotten warmth

eternal strife



I vow to this

as long as I live

I'll never forget

I'll never forgive

:'(

Re: What You Gave Me

Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2002 2:35 pm
by skaterGuy15
Originally posted by Misfit_toy@Dec 24 2002, 05:43 PM

I vow to this

as long as I live

I'll never forget

I'll never forgive



good.



The rest is egh.

Re: What You Gave Me

Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2002 4:52 pm
by forsaken_without_you
*claps* verry well written!