F*** The Mainstream

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F*** The Mainstream

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this isn't supposed to offend anyone but it offended my friend so don't say "you weren't warned"



you look at me,

i stare coldly back,

cuz what you see,

is a freak in black.

but you're the real freak,

the way you all look alike.

fuck the mainstream,

your all the same inside.

your bracelet with horseshoes,

mine with spikes.

i wanna get a tatoo,

you need to get a life.

so you've got more friends,

than anyone in the school.

believe me that will end.

you won't be so cool.

why can't you see,

not everybody's like you?

well fuck the mainstream,

and all the preppies too.
no i'm normal...it's everyone else who's crazy.



how come only some people have that one person to bring them lifelong happiness?



if nobody liked people that were different than them, nobody would like anybody in this world.



r.i.p.

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Woah! that is dead good! :D it rhymed(sp?) dead well...and it didnt offend me either. :huh: But yeah great work :D :)
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Now here you go again, you say you want your freedom

Well who am I to keep you down

It's only right that you should play the way you feel it

But listen carefully to the sound

Of your loneliness



Like a heartbeat drives you mad

In the stillness of remembering what you had

And what you lost



Well It's only me that wants to wrap around your dreams



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GREAT POEM... a little offensive but still a GREAT POEM
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry
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That was REALLY good! I like that alot! Keep writing!!!!
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against
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That is REALLY good! I like how you worded things. Keep writing! :)
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just wow
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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whoa :o ...i didn't think i could write that good!
no i'm normal...it's everyone else who's crazy.



how come only some people have that one person to bring them lifelong happiness?



if nobody liked people that were different than them, nobody would like anybody in this world.



r.i.p.

louie dog(1989-2001)

bradley james nowell(2/22/68-5/25/96)



"good music is good music and that should be enough for anybody."-brad nowell
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whoops.....i had this poem written down and i had the paper sitting on the desk....my mom saw it earlier :unsure: and when she came upstairs just now she's all "that poem was interesting...you could change a couple works but it was a nice poem" she said it was a nice sumthin that sounded like synonym :wacko: but i couldn't tell what she said.whoa...i thought i was screwed! i think ill keep my poem in a nice little book w/ a lock on it from now on
no i'm normal...it's everyone else who's crazy.



how come only some people have that one person to bring them lifelong happiness?



if nobody liked people that were different than them, nobody would like anybody in this world.



r.i.p.

louie dog(1989-2001)

bradley james nowell(2/22/68-5/25/96)



"good music is good music and that should be enough for anybody."-brad nowell
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Originally posted by HockeyPlayinPsychoChick@Mar 21 2003, 10:29 PM

whoa :o ...i didn't think i could write that good!


LoL It really is awesome! You should continue writing stuff.
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Originally posted by HockeyPlayinPsychoChick@Mar 21 2003, 10:36 PM

whoops.....i had this poem written down and i had the paper sitting on the desk....my mom saw it earlier :unsure: and when she came upstairs just now she's all "that poem was interesting...you could change a couple works but it was a nice poem" she said it was a nice sumthin that sounded like synonym :wacko: but i couldn't tell what she said.whoa...i thought i was screwed! i think ill keep my poem in a nice little book w/ a lock on it from now on


At least she didn't say anything bad about it. I freak out when my parents find my poems. It is a VERY good idea to keep them locked in a book or a box.
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yup...another thing for my shopping list...along with the wallet chain that my brother pryed all the links apart from.
no i'm normal...it's everyone else who's crazy.



how come only some people have that one person to bring them lifelong happiness?



if nobody liked people that were different than them, nobody would like anybody in this world.



r.i.p.

louie dog(1989-2001)

bradley james nowell(2/22/68-5/25/96)



"good music is good music and that should be enough for anybody."-brad nowell
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:D That was really really really good, I liked it alot :D



haha, i just reminded myself of a girl from the Cake video clip for Short Skirt, Long Jacket...if anyone knows the one I mean..hmm anyhoo!
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Oh my god that was sooo coool. I hate when people read my poems that i dont want them to. This lad in my class foun a bit of paper ment 2 vanessa (obsessed wit her) and he sed 2 me so sammy do u like writing poems in english and i was like wat? n he gave me the piece of paper n i started 2 cry. lol bless me.

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o that must've sucked
no i'm normal...it's everyone else who's crazy.



how come only some people have that one person to bring them lifelong happiness?



if nobody liked people that were different than them, nobody would like anybody in this world.



r.i.p.

louie dog(1989-2001)

bradley james nowell(2/22/68-5/25/96)



"good music is good music and that should be enough for anybody."-brad nowell
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yea, it did i cant stand ppl readin my stuff wen i dont want them too.
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