A Trip From Grace
Moderator: The Lounge Moderators
-
FranklinF
- Veteran
- Posts: 2788
- Joined: Tue Jun 03, 2003 6:16 pm
- Location: Kansas City
- Contact:
A Trip From Grace
[center]Every once in a while, you stop in moments.
The ones that are life changing.
They edit your thinking.
They make your heart grow.
[/center]
The ones that are life changing.
They edit your thinking.
They make your heart grow.
[/center]
-
Anna_Banana
- Loyal
- Posts: 799
- Joined: Tue Jan 25, 2005 7:56 pm
- Contact:
Re: A Trip From Grace
i liked it...i can see how some people would see it as religious. but it is very deep and consumed with feelings...i loved it, very good ::applause::
if you need to talk feel free to pm me anytime
<3333 Anneliese
-
Eowyn
- Veteran
- Posts: 1183
- Joined: Sun Dec 15, 2002 12:34 pm
- Contact:
Re: A Trip From Grace
wow. I'm actually speechless. I love the style, how it had a constant at the end of each stanza and how it flowed to each stage. It was a beautiful poem, written wonderfully. I'm really speechless, it was that good.
Love is you
........ You and me
...............Love is knowing
...............................we can be
<3 Matthew McNeal<3
8.6.05
.oO sHeLlY Oo.
........ You and me
...............Love is knowing
...............................we can be
<3 Matthew McNeal<3
8.6.05
.oO sHeLlY Oo.
-
FranklinF
- Veteran
- Posts: 2788
- Joined: Tue Jun 03, 2003 6:16 pm
- Location: Kansas City
- Contact:
Re: A Trip From Grace
thanks 
-MARY
-MARY[center]Every once in a while, you stop in moments.
The ones that are life changing.
They edit your thinking.
They make your heart grow.
[/center]
The ones that are life changing.
They edit your thinking.
They make your heart grow.
[/center]