Another Poem From Me

[Jack_Treese]

Okay. Here's another poem I wrote. This one was written a long time ago. Roughly when I was 12.



Life in the eyes of one



People like how I act.

People think I am cool.

People follow me around

Everywhere in the school.



People think I am nice.

People think I am kind.

But what people don't know

about me is totally blind.



I don't have a nice life.

I ruined it long ago.

I wish my life were

a little nicer though.



You see I lost my mom

at the age of two.

Cancer ate away her soul,

Why not mine, too?



I wish it would end.

Life would die just now.

I wouldn't care when,

I wouldn't care how.



But maybe I should calm down,

and talk to my friends

so they don't try the dumb sh*t I did;

They'd be safe in the end.



Now I live with these scars

on these wrists, you can see.

Now people can tell I tried

to kill myself, definetly.



So don't be a dummy,

be good to yourself;

if you wanna be somebody,

don't try to kill yourself.



-Jack Treese



(and YES, I know I have the same words for the last rhyme.)

[RainDrops]

that's good...it feels like my life..with the exception of my mom

[Jack_Treese]

thank you for your feedback

[Sexy Equestrian]

wow, that is really good!! i loved it!!!!