Heartless Fiends

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Eowyn
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Heartless Fiends

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I don't know what made me want to write this...I guess a good nights sleep and pizza for breakfast jump started my mind, considering it was not working yesterday...hope you like it!





There is a

monster inside

of me,

its tearing me

apart.



There is a

monster inside

of me,

it has already

devoured

my

heart.



It has taken

my

thoughts

it has taken

my

soul

it had taken

my

need

to survive,

I am no longer

a

whole.



For now I

am empty

this monster

has changed me.



Inside out,

I am not myself

I am

nothing,

execpt empty.



Empty of emotions

empty of heart

empty of love

empty of every part.



If I am now

empty,

invisible I must

be,

and say goodbye

I will

not,

for hello was

never spoken from

the start.



Heartless fiends

will suck

my life

away

from earth

away from

freedom.



Heartless fiends

suck my

life

devoure my

body

end my

forgotten

strife.



This monster inside

that has

devoured my

life

ended my pain

causing

everyone

strife.



The emptiness

that I felt

was there long

ago,

just not

dealt

with.



The monster

inside

really was

me,

so inside

and out

I always was

empty.
Love is you

........ You and me

...............Love is knowing

...............................we can be






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i thought it was good :)
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Post by sOcCeRoCkEr04 »

:) keep writing.
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