This Stain

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This Stain

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"This Stain"



My life is dirty...

Unclean, messed up

It's time to be washed...

Washed clean of these stains



I am ready

Cover me-past to present

In removers of stain

And drop me

Into this washing machine

For I hope to come clean



I fall into this hole

It's dark-and then the door shuts

The water and suds

I willingly soak up

Then the tumbling starts



Tumbling, tumbling

'Round I go

Who am I?/Where am I?

I do not know



WAIT!!!-Yes I do

AHH! The stains are still here



"Let me sizzle in hot water!"

"More bleach please!"

"Put me on the long cycle!"

"Or make the tumbling go faster!"



It's over

I'm pulled out of the wash

The stains are still here

Deeply inbedded

Within the very fibers of myself



These stains are here

And here forever

I'm on the outside of society

Never to be loved

For who could love someting with stains?



There is only one thing to do

With something that is stained-

Dispose of it



Lucky for you, I will dispose of myself

For I do not want you to use me

As pieces of a quilt-

A quilt that is loved

And remembered forever



All I ask of you,

Is that you'll forget

I ever existed

This is my very last wish
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Post by KermitKnowsIloveHim »

thats really good, u have talent!
<span style='font-family:Geneva'"People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing everyday" ~Winnie The Pooh



The most dire disaster in love is the death of the imagination -G. Meredith



What is a friend? A single soul in two bodies -Aristotle
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Post by LonelyAsYou »

I like it. kinda describes how i feel now :wacko:



keep writing :)
And all the roads we have to walk along are winding

And all the lights that lead us there are blinding

There are many things that I would

Like to say to you

I don't know how



Because maybe

You're gonna be the one who saves me?

And after all

You're my wonderwall
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