Vengence In Death

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If you can't tell...i'm a tad mad at my family...but when aren't I...so I decided to just calm down for once and write out my feelings...I feel better now...



My palms

are

sweaty

my

little heart

throbs,

maybe this

time, I've

done

the job.



My breath

is getting

short

as tears roll

down my

cheeks,

Thank God!

This is working,

I've only been

planning it

for weeks.



The pills went

down

never came

back up,

drank all the

Vodka

that was in

that

cup.



My vision

is getting blurry

Dizzy I

become,

my body

suddenly feels

like it

weighs a

ton.



No one is

home

and I am on

the floor,

luckily

I locked and

chained

the door.



Even if I

would

dial 911

they couldn't

save me

now,

I'm already

to far

gone.



I just pray

my parents

understand

the reasons why

I took my

life,

without a

sound.



I ask God to

watch

over them

as I journey

down to

Hell,

and wish he'd

protect them

greater

and my story

the will tell.



I hope the

world

hears my story

that I was

verbally

abused,

and everyone

was lazy,

I felt like I was

used.



I don't know why

I cry,

as I lay here,

ready for

death.

For my family

put on a

show

these 15 years

and acted

all their

best.



Yet, I put forth

the better

effort

the fools that

they've become...

I acted as well...

they didn't see

the screw up

I'd become.



Hopefully they

do now

as they lower me

into the

ground

and say their

final

fairwells.



I lay here

in Hell

and the story

they

tell, are all

lies,

piled over

the truth.



I'll haunt them

at night

and all day to

for they

will never sleep

again,

until I finally do.



I'll haunt them

until they

tell the truth,

the truth

of their daughter

their acting

their pool

of lies.



Maybe then,

I'll rest

and be at

eternal ease,

but not until

everyone

of their

lives is

seized...



in death...



like me.
Love is you

........ You and me

...............Love is knowing

...............................we can be






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thanks
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........ You and me

...............Love is knowing

...............................we can be






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don't know y i wrote this-but i love it...lol
Love is you

........ You and me

...............Love is knowing

...............................we can be






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i don't like my family much either. it's good. keep writing.
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thnx
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........ You and me

...............Love is knowing

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The pills went

down

never came

back up,

drank all the

Vodka

that was in

that

cup.

:'( :'( :'(
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thnx 4 the replies guys
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:'(
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