Empress Of Evil

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Empress Of Evil

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"Empress of Evil"



This evil Empress...

She has wrapped

Her arms around me

And I am trapped

"How can this be?"-you ask.



To my throat

She holds a knife

"Take a step further

And you're dead"-She says



So I fall further,

...And further

Into her...

Becoming Her,

Believing Her



And now-

I follow her commands



I know I should pull away

But I am bound-

Bound by the curse

That's been placed over my soul



To pull away is death-but...

To stay is certain death as well



She knows this...

And she puts on a malicious smile

"You're mine, and mine forever"

LEAVE ME ALONE!-I burst out



The knife is pushed

And pulled against my throat

"Watch it!"-she hisses



A tear slides down my cheek,

Onto my throat and

Mixes with the blood

From the slit on my neck-



The salt from my tear

Makes it burn

And is torture

Within itself



I must not cry/I must grow cold

I tell myself

For it is the only way to survive

I am so miserable-WAIT!

I HAVE A SOLUTION!



I grab Her knife

Push it harder against my throat

Than she ever has

And pull with such a force-

Even she is surprised



As my blood spills out

The Empress vanishes

Then I realize that

She was just from my mind

And now I....am gonna die
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:'( this is was such a great poem..it was so dark..hehe..but so...sad and angry..it was very emotional..i liked it! keep writing chicka!
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that was really good, keep writing. :rolleyes:
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that was very well written. i loved it. so dark..and full of anger and emotion and sadness.. it made my eyes brim with tears.. keep up the good work



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I'm cutting right now and feel like shit
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i just get joy out of it....it makes the emotional pain ease up.....and now...I recently started jabbing my veins with needles....it feels great



and life is just too much pain
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