Her Untold Story

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Lost_Angel_of_Hope
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Her Untold Story

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this is a poem by me, it aint the best.....









The darkness swells within her sole

her heart is gone and she has no where to go

she got rid of the only one left who cared

people call her a freak, if only some one knew

the pain she suffers is unbearable

there are scars on her arms she refuses to hide

sure, people stare, but what does she care

her once friendly, beautiful eyes have gone cold

her pale, freckled face shows signs of horrid pain

she walks the streets at night waiting for her train

soon it will all be over with, shed be gone

no one will know her this way again,

her body cold, pain in her eyes,

but the will never forget her, she said her goodbyes





Ashley Marie Fredricksen



Copyright ?2003 Ashley Marie Fredricksen
"And I'm beyond your peripheral vision So you might want to turn your head Cause someday you're going to get hungry And eat most of the words you just said."





"I know whats it like to want to die, how it hurts to smile, how you try to fit in but you can't, how you hurt yourself on the outside, to try to kill the pain in the inside."



"A goodbye is only painful when you know you aren't going to say hello again."





"Lingering pain has changed me everyday - and now I'm covered with a substance of darkness that won't wash away."
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keep writing-- :D
keEP on keepING on--

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(cause i need you now more than ever before)

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" i watched the one i love leave me to love someone else, right in front of me, without saying a word. that, is what i consider the worst kind of love. "
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WHEW WHOOO finaly, i get a reply, is my writing that bad :\ probably is,.........**bumps her poem to top**
"And I'm beyond your peripheral vision So you might want to turn your head Cause someday you're going to get hungry And eat most of the words you just said."





"I know whats it like to want to die, how it hurts to smile, how you try to fit in but you can't, how you hurt yourself on the outside, to try to kill the pain in the inside."



"A goodbye is only painful when you know you aren't going to say hello again."





"Lingering pain has changed me everyday - and now I'm covered with a substance of darkness that won't wash away."
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