Eternally Blessed

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Eternally Blessed

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i'm not sure why i post my poetry here. but i like to. if this is amazingly triggering then tell me. cause i don't want to post my other poem if this is TOO triggering. cause the other one might be too much. in the meantime, i'll post some of my less triggering poetry.







Running farther away

Her cold feet hitting the pavement

All those once close to her

Are now so far away

Trying to breath slower

Her heart beating too fast

Her mind is closed

She can't hear anything

anymore



Falling painfully onto the stone

Tripping dreams that once were hers

She wants to know more

Than just her home

She wants to feel life and joy

And something she could call her own



Sitting on the edge of the sidewalk

Resting from her sore fall

She wonders what it would be like

If she had someone to call

She stops thinking

And only one thing comes to mnd

The knife she's kept so far away

Was now her only light



Pushing her knees up to her chest

Pulling her sleeves up to her elbows

She creates a bond between wrist and knife

A bond that can never be broken

This is true friendship

This is her one and only



She closes her eyes

As she carves a cross

All she sees is red

This is all she remembers



Passing out onto the street

Hitter her head against the cold pavement

There are no more tears to be cried

The knife has accomplished it's goal

To eternally bless the miserable.
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wow that was really good.....ur a great writer, keep doin it.
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The end

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This is the end."-The Doors
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Post by sugarpacket »

you were right--very triggering.

also VERY good!! :) keep writing!!! :woot:
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never wanted to stop reading. keep it up.
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