i'm not sure why i post my poetry here. but i like to. if this is amazingly triggering then tell me. cause i don't want to post my other poem if this is TOO triggering. cause the other one might be too much. in the meantime, i'll post some of my less triggering poetry.
Running farther away
Her cold feet hitting the pavement
All those once close to her
Are now so far away
Trying to breath slower
Her heart beating too fast
Her mind is closed
She can't hear anything
anymore
Falling painfully onto the stone
Tripping dreams that once were hers
She wants to know more
Than just her home
She wants to feel life and joy
And something she could call her own
Sitting on the edge of the sidewalk
Resting from her sore fall
She wonders what it would be like
If she had someone to call
She stops thinking
And only one thing comes to mnd
The knife she's kept so far away
Was now her only light
Pushing her knees up to her chest
Pulling her sleeves up to her elbows
She creates a bond between wrist and knife
A bond that can never be broken
This is true friendship
This is her one and only
She closes her eyes
As she carves a cross
All she sees is red
This is all she remembers
Passing out onto the street
Hitter her head against the cold pavement
There are no more tears to be cried
The knife has accomplished it's goal
To eternally bless the miserable.
Eternally Blessed
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wow that was really good.....ur a great writer, keep doin it.
"A man who wouldn't die for something is not fit to live."-Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
"What we have done for ourselves alone dies with us; what we have done for others and the world remains and is immortal."-Albert Pike
"This is the end, beautiful friend,
This is the end, my only friend,
the end,
it hurts to set you free,
but you'll never follow me.
The end
of laughter and soft lies,
The end
of nights we tried to die.
This is the end."-The Doors
"What we have done for ourselves alone dies with us; what we have done for others and the world remains and is immortal."-Albert Pike
"This is the end, beautiful friend,
This is the end, my only friend,
the end,
it hurts to set you free,
but you'll never follow me.
The end
of laughter and soft lies,
The end
of nights we tried to die.
This is the end."-The Doors
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you were right--very triggering.
also VERY good!! keep writing!!!
also VERY good!! keep writing!!!
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never wanted to stop reading. keep it up.
keEP on keepING on--
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