Is It Okay?

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Is It Okay?

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 4:26 pm

Is it okay to say goodbye?

Is it okay to walk away?

Is it okay to never look back?

What if you fallow?

I will never see you again?





All I ever wanted was to be helped?

All the things I said to you where simply a warning..

These things that I told you, you never cared.

Until you walked out of my life without a care in your eyes.

This is enough for me to say goodbye.

The truth in me passes to you, with my back turned, I say goodbye

My past is in your hands, something you took on your own will.

A sweet dream for us both? my future without you seems just fine.





CHOURS

So I take this chance to live the way I want

No longer am I held back from the things I want,

I live the way I have always wanted.

No more excuses to want to bleed,

I keep my head up, the way you always told me
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 4:35 pm

hmmmm, i will think about that one..... <_<
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by shay14 » Sun Feb 02, 2003 5:17 pm

i like it! :D
Late night comes are you home?

No you're not.

You're out with urge to satisfy yourself it's your vicious plot.

Looking back I realize that it's my fault.

I'm not around so your love comes to a halt.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

I feel disgust in myself.

I love how you can call me and pretend you're innocent,

While I'm out here trying to better myself.

You're a pig when it comes to my emotions.

You drown me in your wake because you have no devotion.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 02, 2003 6:00 pm

:blink: :blink: :blink: :) :) :D :D :D :D great work joy. oh and me too would like to hear you sing it!
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:04 pm

i will do it next weekend... considering the fact i am grounded on weekdays off of the computer... ;)
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by bi*moonpoet » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:20 pm

GREAT !!! but i agree with everyone else i want it sung :D
You love who you love it's not 'loving different' it's 'loving' everyone does it.

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:22 pm

alright then! i just have to find a way to post it on the site....
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Is It Okay?

Post by Britt » Mon Feb 03, 2003 8:55 pm

dude..killer awesomeness..and yeah..i have to say it too...i wana hear ya sing it..just like everyone else..sorry if its gettin on your nerves..but i've never heard you b4..i want to so bad.. :wub: haha..its becoming my fav smiley..yeah.. :ph34r:


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