It'd Be Nice

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It'd Be Nice

Post by shay14 » Sun Feb 02, 2003 5:21 pm

Even though this is in mah signature... I just want to know what yous think.





It?d Be Nice



It?d be nice to just be able to crawl out of the little black hole I?ve lived in for the past two years.

It?d be nice to be able to tell someone all mah fears.

It?d be nice if I could cry all the tears I need to cry.

It?d be nice to felt like I could try.

It?d be nice to have all the fears and tears go away

It?d be nice if everything went mah way.

It?d be nice if the feelings I feel could show.

It?d be nice if someone else would know.

It?d be if I could be free from this pain.

It?d be nice if I felt half-way sane.

It?d be nice if everything would become clear.

It?d be nice if all of this would just disappear.




What do yous think?
Late night comes are you home?

No you're not.

You're out with urge to satisfy yourself it's your vicious plot.

Looking back I realize that it's my fault.

I'm not around so your love comes to a halt.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

I feel disgust in myself.

I love how you can call me and pretend you're innocent,

While I'm out here trying to better myself.

You're a pig when it comes to my emotions.

You drown me in your wake because you have no devotion.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

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Re: It'd Be Nice

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 02, 2003 5:58 pm

i think its awesome. did you write it ? if so then great job!
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: It'd Be Nice

Post by shay14 » Sun Feb 02, 2003 7:23 pm

Yeah I wrote it... wrote it like 3 days ago... lol



Yay for me. Someone liked mah poem! :P
Late night comes are you home?

No you're not.

You're out with urge to satisfy yourself it's your vicious plot.

Looking back I realize that it's my fault.

I'm not around so your love comes to a halt.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

I feel disgust in myself.

I love how you can call me and pretend you're innocent,

While I'm out here trying to better myself.

You're a pig when it comes to my emotions.

You drown me in your wake because you have no devotion.

You have no remorse in you.

It's the only thing you know.

You destroy me every time you little cunt.

I never wanted this.

Gave myself to you to get paid back with lies.

Every time I trust you I lose in the end.

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