Un-named..

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Un-named..

Post by sod_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:23 pm

dont look at me

with jealousy

cause u cant blind me

with your envy

dont look at me

with vanity

cause u cant belitte me

with your pomposity

dont look at me

with perversity

cause u cant corrupt me

with your obscenity

dont look at me

with hostility

cause you cant hurt me

with your animosty



dont even try to damage me

cause u wont claim victory

dont even try to see through me

cause u'll end up short-sightedly
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

-Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:31 pm

verry good, i like it
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Un-named..

Post by bi*moonpoet » Mon Feb 03, 2003 5:27 pm

I second that very good ur a good writter i saw some of ur other post i just decided to put it all on 1 post so yea ur a good writter thats all i have to say :unsure:
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Re: Un-named..

Post by Britt » Mon Feb 03, 2003 8:43 pm

dude..your a killer good writer..that poem kicks ass..i killer like it :D


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