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Post by etoiledefootball » Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:49 pm

To Be Me...

You got to have thick skin

brown hair

MY green eyes

my heart

my soul

my love for one girl

the passion for the one I love

the feelings I display

my anger

my sensitivity

my mind

my body

my lips



Sky blackens

water brackens

trees die

people cry

tears of pity

watching the cities

as they all

soon will fall

homes lost

so is trust

leaves change

all so strange

as night closes in

we repent for our sins

and we all see our last troves

of silver and gold

before dark prevails

and light fails

the threat was posed

so hold me close

Over with

Dark and light collide

the stars readily slide

I feel compelled to tell you

It is night

and I'm not right

I'm in a rage

and its not staged

When the stars look at me

I feel wrong

as I climbed into the tree

I looked down and there she was

standing there she had no idea

that it was night

and things weren?t right

she was in a rage

that wasn?t staged

just wasn?t right

she waited for light

to come around

then without a sound

there it was

his bloodied locks

we laid him down

six feet under the ground

and it was night

wasn?t right

people screamed at the scene

the next morning


I try to tell her

but I cant my heart is in my throat

it stays inside eating me alive

I cant keep it in but I have to

she doesn?t want to hear it

I don?t want to bother her

I want to love her

all I want to do is love her

but I cant she wont let me

I cant fake these smiles anymore

I cant hold back these unspokens

weird beings eating my soul

little monsters holding me from living

the unspokens are in everyone and everything

holding us back

unspokens live in us all

they have crumbled my mind

they have swallowed me whole

Unspokens are in me
"All I have

All I am

Nothing you are"


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Re: Poems

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:52 pm

she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?

"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Poems

Post by iHEAVENn » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:03 pm

:) wow! those are awesome! keep it up great job!
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Re: Poems

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Feb 03, 2003 10:09 am

yea what they said. awesome job man
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.

One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Poems

Post by Britt » Mon Feb 03, 2003 8:46 pm

wow dude..killer awesome poems..i like them


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