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Letter To Mom

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:03 pm

dear mom,



hey, how are things going?

for me, they are getting better.

do you remember that talk we had about suicide lastnite?

well you must, because you broke down.

i didnt like the sound of your muffled voice.

i knew i hurt you, but i never ment to.

you say you dont like me in pain, yet you cause most of it...

you told me if i die, i will go to the angels.. you said i could go with God. all these things hurt me...



do you remember that other talk about my pain?

you must because you cryed....

do you remember when i said i cut myself... you said you didnt like knowing i was in such pai... i remember last night... i broke my razor.. and cut my wrist just to see how long it could bleed. it bled for a while really. do you remember when you said i was a verry beautiful girl? i never relised it untill i was in your arms. things are better now, now that i am with God. i hope i didnt hurt you too bad. i tryed to fix it all, but it never would have worked out. you know that. one last thing, mom. do you remember when i said i will always love you? well i do. i think of you always and wait for you to join me. dont go the way i did, i had alot ahead of me... thing could have happend... you have alot going for you, dont fuck up like me.



Love you always,

--Joy
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Post by bi*moonpoet » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:18 pm

uummmm very good but sad, you never stop impressing me :)
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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 10:20 pm

thank you!!!!! :woot: :woot: <_< (sorry, had a burst of energy there)
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Feb 03, 2003 12:03 am

imsorry but i kinda got a vibe from that one that hinted that your poem was a suicide letter. but it was good. dont die on me or ill kill ya!
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Post by FiZzBaW » Mon Feb 03, 2003 12:17 am

Very awsome and emotional writing!



But please don't kill yourself and i hope you never have to put your writing skills to work at writing a letter for that cause



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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Feb 03, 2003 10:04 am

me too. but she wont do it. shes too smart to end it all . right joy? :D
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



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Post by Britt » Mon Feb 03, 2003 8:41 pm

dude joy..i swear that made me cry..i hope you get to see your mom soon..and i don't want you killing yourself or anything like that..aww..this sux cuz im crying and i hate to cry..makes me mad..but it was awesome though..your a sweetie joy.. :wub:


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Re: Letter To Mom

Post by forsaken_without_you » Fri Feb 07, 2003 2:04 pm

hey, i am not going anywhere!



i read that to my mom, i started crying, and so did she, it was a Hallmark moment!



dont worry, i am here to stay! :P
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Letter To Mom

Post by Mail Order » Fri Feb 07, 2003 8:37 pm

Good. You'd better be here for a lot longer, Joy!!!! :blink:
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Letter To Mom

Post by forsaken_without_you » Fri Feb 07, 2003 9:53 pm

never fear, as i say, i am here to stay, iave no resion to leave!
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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