Will You Love Me Soon

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Will You Love Me Soon

Post by Britt » Wed Feb 05, 2003 10:21 pm

When someone is in love

That person is all they can think about

That person is you

I love you so much

When I think about you

I get this feeling

Like butterflies in my stomach

I just wana touch you

I just wana hold you

I just want your body all over me

Beside me, right next to me

Do you love me?Or do you only love he?

I don't understand how you feel

You never let me in

And you know its not a sin

Everything I feel is real

All I want is for you to feel it too

Love me

Like I love you

I'll never give up

I'll try to win you back

I hope your not in to deep

Forever gone

For him to keep

You should be mine

Its only a matter of time

Ti'll I can't take it anymore

Then you'll lose me forever

You'll never know what you missed

The love I could have showed you

The kisses we could have shared

But now I'm gone

I have disappeared


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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by bi*moonpoet » Thu Feb 06, 2003 5:42 pm

this ones good too it sounds like its bout a les or bi gurl fightin for the love of a posibly les or bi gurl anyway its good :)
You love who you love it's not 'loving different' it's 'loving' everyone does it.

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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by Britt » Fri Feb 07, 2003 1:34 am

yeah..thats pretty much what its about..im gona let her read it..i always let her read everything i write..it hurts her..all the feelings i have..cuz she knows all the pain she causes..i wish she would suffer too..


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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by forsaken_without_you » Fri Feb 07, 2003 2:07 pm

:'(
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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what makes it so bad?

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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Fri Feb 07, 2003 7:29 pm

awesome poem.... that was your best yet i think. oh im going through a dry spell now . you wont see much :D of my stuff on here for awile.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by Britt » Sat Feb 08, 2003 5:08 pm

thanx you all...i hope she knows and understands what she has done to me someday...


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Re: Will You Love Me Soon

Post by Britt » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:26 pm

haha..yeah..i share my brain to much..maybe thats why there isn't enough left for me to be smart with


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