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Enemy

Post by Britt » Wed Feb 05, 2003 10:28 pm

Whenever my enemies cross my sight

I try to find a place to hide

All I need is to get away

Disappear from the world

And I will be safe

My worst enemy is my knife

Its always cutting me

Trying to take away my life

Im not sure why it does this stuff

Is it my life thats so screwed up

Maybe the knife is only trying to help

Wanting to take away my life so I can have a better death

Maybe its only fullfilling my wish's

My wish to be dead at the most

Im only another dead soul

But why does the knife have to hurt me so much

Can't it kill me pain free

And why doesn't anyone see

The scars it leaves

The pain I feel

My suicidle thoughts

My dreams within

The ones to be dead


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Re: Enemy

Post by Britt » Thu Feb 06, 2003 4:39 pm

umm..no one wants to reply er what


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Re: Enemy

Post by bi*moonpoet » Thu Feb 06, 2003 5:03 pm

uuummmm .... very good really emotional ur good!! :D
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Re: Enemy

Post by iHEAVENn » Thu Feb 06, 2003 7:57 pm

very very good. i like the way you used the knife lol knives are my enemysssssssssss :ph34r:
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