Pine Needles

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Pine Needles

Post by Jess » Sat Feb 08, 2003 3:45 pm

Browned pine needles cover the

Ground like

Syringes littering a heroin

Addict's corner of an

Alley.
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Re: Pine Needles

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sat Feb 08, 2003 9:32 pm

wow that made no sense whatsoever. but i like it . i might be too dumb to decipher it. good job!!!!
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Re: Pine Needles

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 10:36 pm

great way to confuse me! <_<
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Pine Needles

Post by Jess » Sat Feb 08, 2003 10:38 pm

its comparing pine needles on the ground to syringes in a heroin addict's corner of an alley... :huh: im confused about how you're confused. which is confusing
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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 11:54 pm

oh, god, i have lost it...

SO FUCKING CONFUSED! :angry:
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Pine Needles

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 12:16 am

im sorry...november was a terrible month for me, too
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