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Post by sod_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 5:55 pm

i f*ckin hate laziness

there has to be more than this

more than this emptiness

more than this unhappiness

seize the day they say

but they dont even follow their way

saying shit just to get their pay

being shit every day

i f*cking hate when they do nothing

lacking in feeling

losing their being

their darkness deepening

word is bond they preach

but that saying is beyond their reach

they dont even know what they teach

sucking on favor like a leech

i f*ckin hate that i even try

to get by

just to cry

and knowing why
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Re: Sloth

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 6:05 pm

sounds like you where mad about something... :blink:
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?

"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Sloth

Post by Mail Order » Sun Feb 09, 2003 5:10 pm

That was good, Sod.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Sloth

Post by iHEAVENn » Sun Feb 09, 2003 6:56 pm

Originally posted by forsaken_without_you@Feb 8 2003, 02:05 PM

sounds like you where mad about something... :blink:

sounds like you were very mad :unsure: hope things got better
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Re: Sloth

Post by Sky » Wed Feb 12, 2003 9:19 pm

im glad... that u have found this way 2 vent!
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring


But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Sloth

Post by Britt » Thu Feb 13, 2003 12:54 am

wow..thats like one of the best poems i have ever read..seriously..your a really good writer..


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