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Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 6:01 pm

I see you in this still frame;

I keep my eyes on you, hoping that I will see you walk in to it again,



I miss you more then you can think

I love you more then you can think

I need you more then you can think



Things seem to be so lonely,

Things wont be the same,

Things will return





I stare at the door, with the image of your smile in my head!



Is it my fault you left, don?t let go of life

Its all me, its me its me,all me, me, me!



Life, it?s all stupid and sheltered! Its not me,

its your fault I ended up like this!







I miss you more then you can think

I love you more then you can think

I need you more then you can think







Things seem to be so lonely,

Things wont be the same,

Things will return







And to imagine, I got all this from looking

at your still image in the frame of a picture!






-Joy frechette
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Still Frame

Post by Mail Order » Sat Feb 08, 2003 8:27 pm

That was really good, Joy.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 10:15 pm

thank you guys! :wub:
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Feb 08, 2003 10:27 pm

ambur06: glad to have you abourd, i see you have only 3 posts... :blink:
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 12:19 pm

<_< no mre replys huh???
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 1:39 pm

if you watch it, you can see the ripples move out, its cool! <_<
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Re: Still Frame

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 09, 2003 4:12 pm

how do you make those things??????????? :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Still Frame

Post by Mail Order » Sun Feb 09, 2003 4:31 pm

That's for us to know and you never to find out! Haha.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Still Frame

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 8:57 pm

thats not verry nice! :'( :ph34r: <_<
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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