Valentine's Day Poem

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Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Sun Feb 09, 2003 2:23 pm

I wrote this for my friend Cassandra, I promised her id get her something for Valentine's day so wat u think?





Can't you still see me?

I'm out there forevery waiting.

Squeeze your eyes so you can see

My image in your mind is never fading



I want you to know

This thing which i hold.

It beats soft and low,

But ever strong in my hand's mold



It beats for you, Cassandra,

The one who looks out to me.

You are my only goddess, the one after

All my pain is released surfacely.



How hard is it for you

To decline what I hold in my hand

That which beats for you forever

Until Time's clock has no more sand?
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 2:28 pm

i like it,

i would want to get that!! :D
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 3:46 pm

damn, write me a poem! i always fall for the kind of guys who dont write poems for anyone.
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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 09, 2003 3:49 pm

yea i bet you could get physical with her with that one!! :D :D
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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Mail Order » Sun Feb 09, 2003 3:51 pm

Get your mind out of the gutter, ReVlOnMASSACRE.



Anyway, I'd love to get that poem! But like I said, All the guys here are scared of me. :( :'(
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The seas part when they hit the floor,

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Your eyes they penetrate me,

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 5:41 pm

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Post by iHEAVENn » Sun Feb 09, 2003 6:58 pm

[CENTER]Man I wish you just left me alone.... Cause I was almost home.......

.:..::.?? Toga party anyone ??.::..:.

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The most precious gift my husband has given to me

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Sun Feb 09, 2003 7:01 pm

yah my friend is gonna take it the wrong way though. I dunno, but i promised i get her something for valentine's day



i do like allison this is just for my friend.



And in my creative whisp should i write another one for allison????
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 8:11 pm

no! write one for me! :D
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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:01 pm

do u guys seriously want me 2 write u poems
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:03 pm

:o uh, hello! can you not get the hint?! yus, PLEASE! ;)
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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:08 pm

i want one!!!! :D
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:16 pm

1st cum, 1st serve, right?

i totally asked 1st!
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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Mail Order » Mon Feb 10, 2003 12:51 am

I want one, too!



Oh well. Nobody cares about me. Everybody says I'm scary. Even Sk8er. :'( :'( :'( :'(
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Feb 10, 2003 10:02 pm

i dont think ~Superman's Sexy Princess~ is scary... c,monpeople get your head out of your asses. she really hot........ not scary at all. only to weak mortals .
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Mon Feb 10, 2003 10:11 pm

i like scary!
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Mail Order » Tue Feb 11, 2003 1:34 am

Originally posted by ReVlOnMASSACRE@Feb 11 2003, 02:02 AM

i dont think ~Superman's Sexy Princess~ is scary... c,monpeople get your head out of your asses. she really hot........ not scary at all. only to weak mortals .


:o Wow. Thanks.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Tue Feb 11, 2003 11:16 pm

i guess im a weak horny mortal
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Tue Feb 11, 2003 11:31 pm

thats right sktr you are a weak aroused mortal. but ummm your quite the ladies man. so ill give that to you. but you can still die!
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



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Re: Valentine's Day Poem

Post by Mail Order » Wed Feb 12, 2003 12:59 am

Originally posted by Sk8r_4_LiFe@Feb 12 2003, 03:16 AM

i guess im a weak horny mortal


Haha. We know Sk8er...We know...
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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