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Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 2:49 pm

i persist to try

to find a soul unwilling

to open up the mists,

to discover silences unknowing.



within this soul do i find

a discreet pocket of dreams

covered by a protective shell

to make everything as it seems.



inside this shell i will take

all my thoughts and aspirations

until the bubble explodes

and i am left with desperation.



desperate to seek,

to share,

to find someone who cares;

desperate to seek,

to share,

though i know this someone isnt there.



he is asleep, alone

in his own shadow,

a place where he is isolated

in a rainy, open meadow.



my refusal to accept

his lonely, eccentric ways

leaves me to fend for myself

in a cruel, desolate haze.



from this haze i have emerged

into a place of cruelty,

to present myself to all

without a shred of falsity.



releasing all of my dreams

i have exposed myself bare,

leaving myself open wide

to a world that doesnt care.
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Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 5:18 pm

thanks...unfortunatly other people in here dont think so-they never respond to my poems! :'(
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Post by Misfit_toy » Sun Feb 09, 2003 5:32 pm

I thought it was good as well. Don't worry. People don't respond to my poems either. :unsure:
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Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 5:39 pm

its good to know that im not the only one...but im sorry...if i see any of yours ill read and respond
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Post by Jess » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:04 pm

thanks!
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