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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 9:27 pm

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BRIDGE

Chorus

BRIDGE

Chorus
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 9:35 pm

most likely... yea
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





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Post by Sk8r_4_LiFe » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:02 pm

thats a good poem better than mine
Me: So do you like, HIM?

Rosca: No way, they suck. . .

Me: How can you say that, they're love METAL

Rosca: They ain't Metal!

Me: Well they probably get more women than we will ever in our lives combined

Rosca: Yea cause they're gay. . .

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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:07 pm

thanks, i am working on a melody so i can sing it :D :P <_<
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Post by Britt » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:25 pm

ooo..awesome..me liked it a lot...i havn't written in like ...so many days...i need to write more...i love to write..but yeah..thats a great song..that you wrote..yay..and ummm..its kinda sad too...


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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 09, 2003 10:29 pm

great!! thats a great one joy :D :D :D !!!!!!
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



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Post by forsaken_without_you » Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:02 pm

ahh, sure, anywho... how do i post music on here, i am ready to post it! :blink:
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Post by Sky » Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:04 pm

Hey it really sounds like a good song just practice it (i know it sounds dumb but it really works)... and Preactice and practice then it will even be better... now isent that just exiting! lol sorry it really does sound good though
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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