Silent Suffering

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Silent Suffering

Post by sod_you » Tue Feb 11, 2003 8:54 pm

bright like the sun

but alone in the dark

bearing her burdens

alone.



a sparkle of life

with stars for eyes

but bearing her burdens

alone.



an angel by nature

yet nurture causes her grief

to bear these burdens

alone.



though she fights

with her futile push

she still bears her burdens

alone.



even with an iron fist

to punch away her pain

she will always bear her burdens

alone.



she's branded by birth

she's scarred with love

yet she blindly bears her burdens

alone.



















Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

-Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by Sky » Tue Feb 11, 2003 9:03 pm

that is a GREAT poem full of description and emotion. and it makes the reader want 2 read it over and over again u got an A on this assinment *winks* GOOD JOB loved it keep working hard on other poems and post em!!! :)
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Tue Feb 11, 2003 9:07 pm

that was awesome yo. man that was just what sky said.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by sod_you » Tue Feb 11, 2003 9:11 pm

thanks guys



actually sky...i HAVE posted a lot of poems..just go back to prev pages..i dont kno if u saw them..



poems have been coming slowly to me lately..i havent been posting for quite awhile
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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by Britt » Wed Feb 12, 2003 2:39 pm

dude...killer awesome poem...i like how you used all the words there...its pretty good..


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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:16 pm

I think I need 2 move this 2 suicide...
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by smlltwn_chick » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:21 pm

great job
*She's a mystery

My most beautiful regret

I will never understand her

She's a mystery

The only promise I can keep

Even in my dreams she ruins me*



*I've found the one I need.. The only trick will be to get her to show up at my door arms full of lilies and eyes full of love*

Life..Written on blank white pages

*out and open L-girl*

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by xxwhereisfredxx » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:22 pm

sky.....NO you dont need to move that to suicide!! its STILL A POEM! lol, poems that are about sex, aren't in sex....poems about music, aren't in entertainment.



POETRY BELONGS IN THE SELF EXPRESSION PART!!!!



thats what i think at least!
When I hear somebody sigh that Life is hard, I am always tempted to ask, Compared to what?

If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.

Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.


You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?

It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:29 pm

okay ;) i got it back!!! calm down pplz lol... :) B) its cool now
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Silent Suffering

Post by xxwhereisfredxx » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:30 pm

lol. you're just going MOD crazy, thats all! lol
When I hear somebody sigh that Life is hard, I am always tempted to ask, Compared to what?

If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.

Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.


You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?

It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.

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