*one To Many Maybe's*

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*one To Many Maybe's*

Post by iHEAVENn » Thu Feb 13, 2003 3:04 am

maybe no one knows

maybe no one sees

maybe theres a part of that keeps drifting

maybe theres a part of me thats dead

maybe i should try to go to bed?

maybe i should pray?

maybe i should hope for a better day?

maybe if i told you.

maybe if i showed you.

maybe if i took your hand

maybe if i believed you when you talked

maybe if i stood by you when you walked

maybe some day i can hold you again.

maybe feel the love we shared again.

maybe these feelings will fade

maybe they shall stay.

maybe i should stop dreaming and forget believeing?

maybe my life is hopeless

meaningless

pointless

worthless

maybe its over......
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Re: *one To Many Maybe's*

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:26 am

I like ur poem barely hanging on its focused on 1 word (which I like) Maybe.... really good poem there is NO maybe about that :) !
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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