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Post by smlltwn_chick » Thu Feb 13, 2003 6:27 pm

It all ends the same

with nothing nothing but pain

Enough pain to make rivers of blood and tears flow enough to make me realize nothing is what I know

I feel the blade against my flesh with a little bit more pressure there will be nothing left

All the thoughts of the past run through my mind

With just a little push I can leave nothing, only my body behind

So with as much hate for myself as I can find

I urge the blade into my skin and watch the thick redness swell around it and create a bind

Creating a pain and pleasure like no other I have been realesed

All the pain and heartache of my being has finally begun to cease

And I can once again be whole and true because I am without me
*She's a mystery

My most beautiful regret

I will never understand her

She's a mystery

The only promise I can keep

Even in my dreams she ruins me*

*I've found the one I need.. The only trick will be to get her to show up at my door arms full of lilies and eyes full of love*

Life..Written on blank white pages

*out and open L-girl*

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Re: Tired

Post by iHEAVENn » Thu Feb 13, 2003 7:45 pm

:( that one was deppressing. but good lol keep up the good job. i love your poems. :D
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Re: Tired

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 7:53 pm

yes that was a depressing poem but I guess depressing morbid poems make this forum go round lol! :) but that was a LOVELY depressing poem (theres a difference)
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring


But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Tired

Post by FiZzBaW » Thu Feb 13, 2003 9:32 pm

Like most said its a great poem, however depressing :-)

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