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smlltwn_chick
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Post by smlltwn_chick » Thu Feb 13, 2003 6:37 pm

It all began that one fateful day

When you said what you did that way

I told you what I felt and hoped you would understand

Instead you planned



To ruin everything I worked for my whole life

You took it away with strife



I thought for awhile about what I could do

But all that came to me was to kill you



So I quickly made up my mind

I became unconfined



I said I was sorry and I said I was sad

So I took the only escape and I just ran
*She's a mystery

My most beautiful regret

I will never understand her

She's a mystery

The only promise I can keep

Even in my dreams she ruins me*



*I've found the one I need.. The only trick will be to get her to show up at my door arms full of lilies and eyes full of love*

Life..Written on blank white pages

*out and open L-girl*

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Re: Sorry

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 8:45 pm

wow nice poem *winks* really good

Its actually really catchy (in a good sense) It makes the reader want 2 read more!!! :) MORE MORE MORE MORE lol im obbsessed with good poetry... :wacko: :blink:
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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