Walk

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smlltwn_chick
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Walk

Post by smlltwn_chick » Thu Feb 13, 2003 7:21 pm

You walk through the street

and you just might meet

Another stranger or two

That you thought you knew



Could this be

A sign of the tragedy?

Of time well spent

Tryin to vent



All the memories of the past

You thought you got rid of so fast

But there back like a flash

With a crash



Through the wall

Down the hall

Into bed

Through my head



They seep as I weep

I thought they would dissapear

Without a tear

How wrong was I

To think a lie



Would come and go

Like a foe

Without a cause

Would you pause



To answer me

Or would you be

Exactly everything that I need
*She's a mystery

My most beautiful regret

I will never understand her

She's a mystery

The only promise I can keep

Even in my dreams she ruins me*



*I've found the one I need.. The only trick will be to get her to show up at my door arms full of lilies and eyes full of love*

Life..Written on blank white pages

*out and open L-girl*

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Re: Walk

Post by Sky » Thu Feb 13, 2003 7:44 pm

good ... I like the description in your poem its really well though out... me=like I'd give it a HIGH B..... But that is just a great poem
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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