Let me fall

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Let me fall

Post by Sky » Fri Dec 20, 2002 8:22 pm

Let me fall

Let me climb

Theres a momment when dreams and fear collide



Somone am I

Is waiting for courage

The one I want

The one I become will catch me



So let me fall

If I must fall

I wont heed your warnings

I wont hear them



Let me fall

If I fall

Through the Pheonix May

Or may not rise



I will dance so freely

Holding on to no one

You can hold me only

If you to fall

Away from all these

Useless fears and chains



Someone I am

Is waiting for my courage

The one I want

The one I will become

Will catch me



So let me fall

If I must fall

I wont heed your warnings

I wont hear



Let me fall

If I fall

There's no reason

To miss this one chance

This one perfect momment

Just Let me fall
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Let me fall

Post by Tina » Fri Dec 20, 2002 10:01 pm

That's really good. Did you write that yourself? if so keep up the good work. :)
"Most people love you for who you pretend to be... to keep their love, you keep pretending - performing. You get to love your pretense... It's so true, we're locked in an image, an act. And the sad thing is, people get so used to their image; they grow attached to their masks; they love their chains. They forget all about who they really are. And if you try to remind them, they hate you for it. They feel like you're trying to steal their most precious possession."

-Jim Morrison

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Re: Let me fall

Post by Sky » Sat Dec 21, 2002 7:38 pm

yes i wrote this
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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