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Misfit_toy
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Behind

Post by Misfit_toy » Sat Dec 21, 2002 3:35 pm

Behind callousness I hide my emotions

Behind confidence I hide my fears

Behind strength I hide my insecurities

Behind forced smiles I hide many tears



Beind persistance I hide uncertainty

Behind nonchalance I hide much pain

Behind perfection I hide deep worthlessness

Behind fake pride I hide my shame



Behind hope I hide constant desperation

Behind serenity I hide desperate cries

Behind courage I hide neuroticism

Behind health I hide inner demise



Please don't ever judge my book by its cover

And don't listen to my covert lies

Because my unapproachable demeanor

Is simply a fear-driven disguise



My soul hides behind unpenetrable walls

My true self resides deep within me

Although fear makes such a task impossible

I want so badly to set "me" free



Please don't believe when I say I don't need help

Stop this cancer from taking its toll

For it you fail to see my hidden anguish

This blakness will soon destroy my soul :'(
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Post by xxwhereisfredxx » Sat Dec 21, 2002 7:55 pm

i like your whole poem! thats really good......and its its its...damnit i can't think of the word....i dunno i guess kinda revealing
When I hear somebody sigh that Life is hard, I am always tempted to ask, Compared to what?

If we did the things we are capable of, we would astound ourselves.

Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.


You see things; and you say Why? But I dream things that never were; and I say Why not?

It is a hard matter, my fellow citizens, to argue with the belly, since it has no ears.

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