I’m lost, I’m dead, Its hard to breathe
is happiness there it’s not easy to believe
Confusion, hatred and guilt abound
behind this mask I wear around
I scream to the world but nobody hears
the screams are trapped inside my cage
along with my beaten soul and unleashed rage
here i am, crashing through a house of mirrors
filled with confliction and endless fears
Floods of tears still restrained
Burn behind my glass covered eyes
I look upon who i am “what is gained?”
my heart.. slowly bleeds and dies
every morning i awake
I in the mirror.. i am such a fake
I dare you, look in my eyes, look beyond.
you will see behind the mask..
but if you dare I will have to deny it..
too many times i have been hurt
adding more scars to my pile of dirt
I am locked up and lost forever
behind my eyes contained within myself
my heart locked up and put on the shelf
there are no chances of escape.. not ever
Here i am lost forever..
What do you think??
Lost Inside Myself
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Lost Inside Myself
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Re: Lost Inside Myself
this is my first crack at rhyming <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... tongue.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' /> im not sure what too think about it lol <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... unsure.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':unsure:' />
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"Life is not the cards you hold.. its how well you play them."
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Re: Lost Inside Myself
So either nobody thinks or i just suck that bad at rhyming lol <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... tongue.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' />
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Re: Lost Inside Myself
i think ur poem is realllyyy good. it explains things that happen a lot like when u said "behind this mask I wear around" i feel that way also because i try to hide my feelings in public and wear a fake smile (mask) but when i get home, i let it all out, but sometimes i hold my screams (in that cage) for days because i usually only let them out when i am the only one there. i think that you should be an author or something, good job!
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Re: Lost Inside Myself
Wow, I think it's really good, are you sure it's your first? <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... renske.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':renske:' />
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