Sorrow Never Here

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Sorrow Never Here

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Jan 25, 2003 2:32 am

My life seemed so worthless, and hollow

but through all my scars and bloodshed

I have learned to hide my pain

The sky seems so beautiful,

But I never deserved to be

Near such beauty

I look into an open cut and fear

What you might say.

A live dream that can seem so real.

I can?t accept the reality of what I have done

Fear and worry overtake my heart.

Looking into the eyes of pain, that are not mine,

I am slowly being killed. The pain I feel is being

Sent to you. Fear is in me, being sent to you

When we speak.

When I was so worthless, I was vulnerable to

All the reality. Now I see I am meant for life.

I live in this dream of mine, through all the

cuts and burns, my past was never accepted.

Reality is such a joke; I am the joke in many

Eyes. Now that the pain is gone...the joke is getting old.

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lemme know what you all think!
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by forsaken_without_you » Sat Jan 25, 2003 6:13 pm

thank you :wub:
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Post by Sky » Sun Jan 26, 2003 5:19 pm

*claps* thats good i rated 9
<span style=\'font-family:Times\'Something told the wild geese

It was tine to go

Through the fields lay golden

Something wispered- "SNOW"

Leaves were green and stirring

Berries,luster-glossed

But beneath the warm feathers

Something cautioned- "FROST"

All the sagging orchards

Steamed With amber spice

But each wild breast stiffened

At rembered ice

Something told the wild geese

It was time to fly-

Summer sun was on their wings

Winter in their cry

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Re: Sorrow Never Here

Post by Britt » Sun Jan 26, 2003 7:00 pm

hey sweet...love the poem..i wrote some more yesterday..so i am gona post some today...i hope i get my other ones back soon so i can post them...


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Re: Sorrow Never Here

Post by Mail Order » Sun Jan 26, 2003 7:09 pm

**Gives a standing ovation** That was really good!





Ok...now I feel dumb. :ph34r:
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Sorrow Never Here

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Jan 26, 2003 7:18 pm

hehe, thank you all! :)
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?





"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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