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Post by iHEAVENn » Sat Jan 25, 2003 4:24 am

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crawling on the ground

each breath shorter than the last

i hear her cries but dont reply

shes beggin me

asking me

pleading for her life

her voice is screaming inside my head

loud enough to wake the dead

still she crawls

past the door

on the bloodied floor

her wrists are shatterd

her stomache slashed

he took one look and never came back

she crawls to my feet

i look at her the one who was so sweet

her times running out

she no longer shouts

never again will i have to put up with it

never again will i have to face her

that girl

the one laying at my feet


wrists shattered

stomache slashed

never again shall i look back :blink: well wasnt that pleasant? :blink:
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Re: .:.shattered.:.

Post by Mail Order » Mon Jan 27, 2003 1:39 am

Wow. That was SO good BHO. I loved it.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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