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Post by Britt » Mon Jan 27, 2003 1:58 am

Wow! I'm all alone now

I have no one

It always seems to happen

First her, then him

I now have no reason to live

No one to look forward to

No one from which I will receive a kiss

Maybe I'll get over it

Forget about the pain

Not give into the hurt

Maybe I still have a chance with her

I hope she wants me

I hope she cares

But I know me and him are over

He dumped me

Just cut me

It won't hurt as much

Right now I just want to cry

Just want to take away my life

Why can't I do it?

Maybe because I love her

I don't want to hurt her

I don't want her to cry

If she wasn't here, if I had never met her

It would all be so much easier

I wouldn't be here

Would't be alive


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Post by Britt » Mon Jan 27, 2003 3:00 am

tell me what you all think of this...i need some honest opinions here


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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Jan 27, 2003 8:11 pm

awesome awesome awesome. thats a great one.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Post by Britt » Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:06 pm

thanx..i like the lines...he dumped me..just cut me..it won't hurt as much...they sound good to me...


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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:42 pm

i agree.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Post by lil_angel_lover » Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:55 pm

Excellent poem. ;) :D
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Post by Britt » Mon Jan 27, 2003 10:44 pm

thank you people


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