Surround Sadness

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Surround Sadness

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Wed Jan 29, 2003 12:12 am

all the tears and all the pain

this is what happened when sadness came.

what makes this so damn hard

this isnt really who you really are.

surround sadness left its scar.

its stays there pulling at your sleeve

as long as your down its never going to leave.

ripping at your clothes ripping at your heart

pulling and sucking until its breaks apart.

some may never recover. some will meet there doom

some will spend forever more in a padded room.

some take the knife. some take the gun

some enjoy pushing us to this thinking that its fun

but if we make if through we can show them what they spoiled

all the innocent souls they left tarnished and soiled

sometimes they get put down and sometimes they get hit.

they take there anger out on us and never seem to quit.

we werent born to fight a war

i cant take anymore

but look at us soldiers now .

hollow to the core

when there murders do what they think they must.

they are to blinded to notice



all they are is one of us.......
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Surround Sadness

Post by iHEAVENn » Wed Jan 29, 2003 12:20 am

:) i like it its good good job very very good job :)
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Re: Surround Sadness

Post by Britt » Wed Jan 29, 2003 1:11 am

wow..thats killer good..i really really liked it..i enjoy reading all the stuff you write..its awesome :D


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Re: Surround Sadness

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Wed Jan 29, 2003 10:08 am

thank you :D :D :D
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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