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Post by sod_you » Wed Jan 29, 2003 7:52 pm

complete silence, a gasp of breath

a sudden slash, a scent of death.

a cold sharp knife flashes its face

through velvet darkness and empty space

a shadow leaves, not a trace left behind

only wide-open eyes now blind

no one found anything, mystery's born

nothing left behind, only people who mourn

tears fall everywhere..the emptiness increases

the cry of her family never ceases

and during all this, somewhere that someone still treads,

when really it should be that girl instead.

it's really disturbing; it's just not fair.

fate comes along, takes life, and doesn't care

leaving behind a perverse result

attacking faith like a catapult.

a guilty man still stalks the earth

because justice did not give birth.

for theres only one witness in which truth can be said,

but that one witness is...dead.
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

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Re: Buried

Post by iHEAVENn » Wed Jan 29, 2003 7:56 pm

o0o i like it good job :) can u write more please i wanna read em lol
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Re: Buried

Post by FiZzBaW » Wed Jan 29, 2003 9:05 pm

Another GREAT poem, Please keep writing, I find your poems enlightening and entertaining!!

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