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Sometimes

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Thu Jan 30, 2003 9:51 pm

chow down on my nerves

bite off a piece of my temper

you stand as i sit

you treat me as you see fit

you do to me as you please

screaming at hating

your the disease

im done take it all

cuz when i show up

your gonna fall.

down into hell where you belong



cuz sometimes i cant take the pressure

of you ripping and beating and tearing away

i cant take the comments and insults and dying every fucking day.



soon it will change its all gonna change.

everything will be different

im sick of your ass fucking with me

your to stupid ILL MAKE YOU SEE

taunting and hating dissasembling me

see whats youve created a monster whos trying

a monster whos dead a monster whos crying

cuz sometimes i cant take the pressure



of you ripping and BEATING and TEARING AWAY

i cant take the COMMENTS AND INSULTS AND DYING EVERY FUCKING DAY!



sometimes i look up at your face and i writh in disgust

I DISGUST YOU AND ALL THAT YOU ARE

I DISGUST YOU!

I DISGUST YOU!

I HATE YOU!





JUST DIE

JUST DIE

JUST DIE

JUST DIE

JUST DIE

JUST DIE.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: Sometimes

Post by FiZzBaW » Thu Jan 30, 2003 10:57 pm

Bravo!!!! :)



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Re: Sometimes

Post by Mail Order » Fri Jan 31, 2003 12:29 am

Is that the one you told me you were writing???



Anyway, that's really good!
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In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: Sometimes

Post by iHEAVENn » Fri Jan 31, 2003 1:47 am

:D i like it, it express feelings that alot of people have. sounds like a song i know from papa roach kinda but a little bit different well any ways GREAT job post more for us to read ur really good at writing :D
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Re: Sometimes

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Fri Jan 31, 2003 10:02 am

:D thank you! it still needs a little ajustments though. ill work on them later but thank you guys for liking my stuff. :D :D :D
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.



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