This Girl...

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This Girl...

Post by Mail Order » Sat Feb 01, 2003 9:31 pm

This Girl

She closes her eyes and counts to ten

Hoping when she opens them

Everything will be normal again

She thinks that if she keeps herself busy

It will help to pass the time

And maybe take the reality of this life away

There are a million thoughts constantly going through her head

She has so much to say,

But can't ever seem to find the words to explain

It would be so much easier to just give up,

Not care, or give in

But she keeps on going

Chin up, with a big smile

Everyone thinks she's so happy, careless, free and full of life

But what they don't know is when she's alone

All she can do is cry

And crying gets old sometimes

She beats herself up over the little things

Even she, doesn't know why

That's just the way she is

She says it's all just fine

But if you look a little closer into the deep green eyes

Even you would see,

She's in denial
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sat Feb 01, 2003 9:56 pm

awesome awesome awesome! i love it. your good :D :D :D
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

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Re: This Girl...

Post by Mail Order » Sat Feb 01, 2003 10:03 pm

Thanks, person that I still don't know.
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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Re: This Girl...

Post by FiZzBaW » Sat Feb 01, 2003 10:49 pm

ONE OF THE BEST AND DEEPEST TO THE HEART POEMS I HAVE SEEN IN THESE FORUMS!! BRAVO AND CONGRATS ON GREAT WRITING SKILLS!!!



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Re: This Girl...

Post by Mail Order » Sat Feb 01, 2003 11:21 pm

Thanks. :blink:
ATTENTION: Due to finanical difficulties, the light at the end of the tunnel has been switched off.

"They turn the lights down low,

In shadows hiding from the world,

Only coming out when it gets cold.

The seas part when they hit the floor,

The voices carry on and out the door

And everything you touch turns into gold

Like the angel you are you laugh creating a lightness in my chest,

Your eyes they penetrate me,

(Never cease to amaze me)

That's when I got up and left" Like The Angel - Rise Against

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