I Think Not

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I Think Not

Post by Flowers For The Dead » Sun Feb 02, 2003 12:58 am

my hands start to shake

you stare sparking my anger

knowing what you instill in me

you follow me everywhere.

can it be that it is impossible

to spare a moment from your presence.


always in the corner of my eyes

parting not a moment from my life.

i shout at you.

why wont you leave me be?

god take away my eyes so i cant see

go away


stop haunting me

always turning around to be in your face.

your grip fractures my spine

your eyes are burned into my mind.

why wont you die?

when i find time to sleep

your wide awake.

in the corners .

in the dark

staring me down

with blood red lips

covered in dirt

tilting your head you look over my shoulder.

shuffled feet behind me.

the heat is on 70 but its 50 degrees colder.

back around my glance halts at your face 3 inches from mine.

ive lost my mind.

against my will downstairs i go

pick up the rifle and head for the snow.

outside you and the others stare at me.

seeing you again i think not.

i leave my body with one last shot.
Fill up the bucket with whatever ya got.

Make sure it's somethin' that the bucket likes alot.

One day CUT FREE!!!!

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Re: I Think Not

Post by forsaken_without_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 1:02 am

wow, i am in awe!
she said she cared...then why am I all alone..?

"would you like a piece of candy?" -

what makes it so bad?

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Re: I Think Not

Post by FiZzBaW » Sun Feb 02, 2003 1:06 am

Its great, kinda sounds like it could be made into a hard rock song lol :-p

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Re: I Think Not

Post by sod_you » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:19 am

wow..pretty final ending. hah, it surprised me. props to the poem..it was well said. :D
Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.

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