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Post by cuteandplayful » Tue Sep 13, 2005 1:36 am

I'm not much of a title person. I can never think of good ones, so I just write. They're about my 'best' friend going out with my older brother. As you can tell I'm not happy with it.



How can I put into words how I feel?

I just cant believe this, is it real?

My bloodsister was just like me,

Our friendship seemed to good to be,

It took a long time, but we fell apart,

Like a balloon hit with a dart,

It happened slowly, we didnt know,

That the gap between us began to grow,

My brother or me? Its a war I should fight,

But I have no more ambition, though its not right,

Maybe its because I know one day you'll see,

That thinking what I think wasnt so wrong of me,

But if all works out I'll understand,

And in apologies I'll give my hand,

For thinking the way I thought,

All I want you to know, is I miss you alot.

I miss when we'd walk to big hole,

And talked about life as we smoked a bowl,

But I hope in many a-way,

That those days will come back someday.



How often have you ever seen me bitchy, depressed, or mad?

Aren't I always the one whos happy, never sad?

Your my best friend and this is what you say,

But its something I do, I must be this way,

For awhile I felt I could open up to you,

But when you are with him, I find it isnt true,

I remember in the good times past,

We'd reflect on our friendship and swear to make it last,

Now it seems I've been replaced,

By my own brother, I feel disgraced,

I know things will never be the same,

I no longer call you your nickname but by your name,

I often feel like you ignore me,

I'd tell you but you wouldnt see,

Maybe you'd get mad or wouldnt care,

Either way, it still isnt fair,

Its okay, we've gone thro this stage before,

This time, when its over I wont be there anymore.
It seems to be that on Oct. 14, 2006, I'll be bring my own lil blessing into this world. I'm so happy, I will do everything to make sure my baby has everything good! It makes my heart ache, I cant wait! I know it wont always be perfect, but we'll make the best out of every moment. Its worth it.



I'm deeply in love with someone who makes the world make sense.

You know when you love someone, you cant explain why, it all just makes sense in a crazy way. Its addicting but it makes you open your eyes and live for who and what you are. There is just something about the way they make you feel, it just opens your heart and makes you love. You cant control it, the emotions you feel. For me, it makes me a happier, brighter person. I'm grateful for this.

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Post by Anna_Banana » Tue Sep 20, 2005 12:57 am

i love those...and im sorry that happened. i hope all turns out well.



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Post by cuteandplayful » Thu Sep 22, 2005 2:06 pm

Thanks :) Things havent gotten any better since I wrote those, but I'm starting to accept it.
It seems to be that on Oct. 14, 2006, I'll be bring my own lil blessing into this world. I'm so happy, I will do everything to make sure my baby has everything good! It makes my heart ache, I cant wait! I know it wont always be perfect, but we'll make the best out of every moment. Its worth it.



I'm deeply in love with someone who makes the world make sense.

You know when you love someone, you cant explain why, it all just makes sense in a crazy way. Its addicting but it makes you open your eyes and live for who and what you are. There is just something about the way they make you feel, it just opens your heart and makes you love. You cant control it, the emotions you feel. For me, it makes me a happier, brighter person. I'm grateful for this.

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Post by Anna_Banana » Thu Sep 22, 2005 2:28 pm

that's the only way they can get better...is if you accept it. maybe you and your old friend can start getting close again.
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Post by cuteandplayful » Thu Sep 22, 2005 3:20 pm

I dont want to get close to her again, shes not really a good friend. Well she is if you can laugh and giggle with her but if your depressed or upset about something, dont expect her to be there for you. But if shes having the slightest conflict (ex: a cold) its the BIGGEST deal. Get what I mean?
It seems to be that on Oct. 14, 2006, I'll be bring my own lil blessing into this world. I'm so happy, I will do everything to make sure my baby has everything good! It makes my heart ache, I cant wait! I know it wont always be perfect, but we'll make the best out of every moment. Its worth it.



I'm deeply in love with someone who makes the world make sense.

You know when you love someone, you cant explain why, it all just makes sense in a crazy way. Its addicting but it makes you open your eyes and live for who and what you are. There is just something about the way they make you feel, it just opens your heart and makes you love. You cant control it, the emotions you feel. For me, it makes me a happier, brighter person. I'm grateful for this.

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Post by Anna_Banana » Sun Sep 25, 2005 1:48 am

yeah. i get what you mean. don't ask her for help. she wants people to think she has the oh-so perfect life while behind that she is suffering. i'm the same way with certain people. i pretend to be so happy, always smiling, but on the inside its tearing my into pieces. we all do that. you don't have to get close to her, but you'll have to get along atleast. hopefully sooner or later she will realize what she lost. i know she regrets it because you are an amazing person, and i'm sure you're one of the best friends someone could have. pm me if you want to talk.
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Post by cuteandplayful » Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:05 pm

Thanks Anna. I'm not sure how good of a friend I am, but when I say "best friend" I mean it. I just treat people how I'd like to be treated. Altho with her it didnt work I guess. But anyways.. Thank you for being such a big support for me! I really appreciate it.
It seems to be that on Oct. 14, 2006, I'll be bring my own lil blessing into this world. I'm so happy, I will do everything to make sure my baby has everything good! It makes my heart ache, I cant wait! I know it wont always be perfect, but we'll make the best out of every moment. Its worth it.



I'm deeply in love with someone who makes the world make sense.

You know when you love someone, you cant explain why, it all just makes sense in a crazy way. Its addicting but it makes you open your eyes and live for who and what you are. There is just something about the way they make you feel, it just opens your heart and makes you love. You cant control it, the emotions you feel. For me, it makes me a happier, brighter person. I'm grateful for this.

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Post by Anna_Banana » Wed Sep 28, 2005 9:47 am

not a problem at all sweetheart. if your best wasent good enough for her then she doesn't deserve to have you as a friend anyways. just remember i'm here if you need it, love.
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Post by cuteandplayful » Thu Apr 20, 2006 10:27 pm

Update: Well.. shes pregnant with my bros baby, they are broken up and she basically hates him. But I'm also pregnant, so it makes it easy for me to see her point of view on the situation. I've basically gotten over everything, and she and I talked about it and figured it all out. So now we're back to being best buds. Actually.. shes the only friend I have now, all my other ones are gone now that I'm pregnant(sad huh?). I'm the only friend she has too. I guess she realizes how good of a friend I am, cuz she tells me all the time now that she appreciates me and I'm her best friend.
It seems to be that on Oct. 14, 2006, I'll be bring my own lil blessing into this world. I'm so happy, I will do everything to make sure my baby has everything good! It makes my heart ache, I cant wait! I know it wont always be perfect, but we'll make the best out of every moment. Its worth it.



I'm deeply in love with someone who makes the world make sense.

You know when you love someone, you cant explain why, it all just makes sense in a crazy way. Its addicting but it makes you open your eyes and live for who and what you are. There is just something about the way they make you feel, it just opens your heart and makes you love. You cant control it, the emotions you feel. For me, it makes me a happier, brighter person. I'm grateful for this.

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Post by dna13 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 4:54 am

Great poem! Hope everything goes well!
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What's the worst that I can say?

Things are better if I stay

So long and goodnight

So long and goodnight



Well if you carry on this way

Things are better if I stay

So long and goodnight

So long and goodnight



Can you hear me?

Are you near me?

Do we deserve, to leave the earth

we'll meet again

When both our hearts collide




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